Thursday, 26 August 2021

Tooty Fruity city.

This is a recount about my famous fruit city, it is called tooty fruity. It has all the exiting things in the world including a watermelon wave pool and a dragon fruit cliff with gigantic caves and pools.

  

1 comment:

  1. Hi Archie, I thought that your blog post was amazing. The mango caravans remind me of lous alves. It sounded like an awesome place to live. Maybe next time you could try not to be quite so repetitive. I still thought that your blog was AMAZING though.

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